One comment on “The Chronicles of Johnny Pheryl: Running…

  1. I like your descriptive style a lot. One thing to be careful of is when you are creating action and urgency in a piece (Running)it is a good idea to keep the pacing of you action in mind and don’t allow the descriptive to extend longer than the action it describes. The writing is very good. Wish you all the best
    Bill Boyle

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